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More on Plot Conflict and Willy Wonka

26 Sunday Jul 2026

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Some time ago, I wrote a post on Roald Dahl’s Charlie and the Chocolate Factory in which I noted some features of the plot and writing technique that seem out of fashion today—chiefly that the second half of the book lacks a conflict, strictly speaking, yet remains interesting to the reader because it uses two intertwined mysteries to drive the action. Last night, I saw for the first time the 1971 movie Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory, the classic movie with Gene Wilder in the title role. Interestingly, several of the creative changes made by the movie were directly responsive to the features I noted in my prior post.

[Spoilers ahead!]

First, the moviemakers clearly picked up on the Wonka-as-devil-figure aspect and leaned into it. According to director Mel Stuart, Gene Wilder was cast partly because “[h]e had the sardonic, demonic edge we were looking for.” The one song that was lifted almost verbatim from the book, the “There’s no knowing where we’re going” sequence in the boat, was accompanied by psychedelic imagery that grew more disturbing as the song went on, with new verses added: “Are the fires of Hell a-glowing? / Is the grisly reaper mowing?”

Additionally, a new temptation theme is introduced into the movie, in the form of the apparent plot to steal the Everlasting Gobstoppers, which turns out to be a scheme by Wonka himself (and just how does “Mr. Slugworth” manage to show up immediately at various points around the world, as if by magic?). Relatedly, Wonka has the children sign a contract with illegible small print, about which more later, and he is quick to invoke the contract to effectively cheat the children out of their promised chocolate. And, of course, Wonka’s seeming indifference to the fate of the children is emphasized in Wilder’s inimitable style (to the point of producing several internet memes). So yes, Willy Wonka as a potential stand-in for the Devil is very much in play.

Second, the scriptwriters decided to change the plot fundamentally, by having Grandpa Joe and Charlie sneak some of the Fizzy Lifting Drink against Wonka’s express instructions. It was probably this and its consequences that led Roald Dahl to sever ties with the movie, because it deeply damaged the central morality play of the book: Charlie was the good boy who sacrificed for others, followed the rules, and deserved the happy ending, as compared to the other children who demonstrate their character flaws by taking what they are not allowed to take. With the script’s change, nothing fundamentally separates Charlie from the others, until his redemptive act in the climax.

Why make this change? I think they were trying to do two things here. First is to reintroduce conventional plot conflict for the movie, by having Charlie break the contract and putting Charlie’s prize in jeopardy. Second, they wanted to make Charlie a more active character in his story. In the book, he displays his virtue in the initial stages of the plot, but then is reduced to a bystander during the factory tour. The scriptwriters, it seemed, felt that Charlie needed a moment of supreme virtue at the climax—his decision to give back the Gobstopper despite every possible reason not to—so that he deserves his happy ending more directly.

Was this a good change? I have my doubts. The plot device of the contract makes Wonka a much more spiteful character than in the book. And Charlie’s decision to return the Gobstopper and doom his family to grinding poverty, just after Wonka betrays him, strains credulity.

So what else could the movie have done? The more recent Tim Burton version decided to hew more closely to the original plot, right up to the point where Wonka demands that Charlie leave his family behind in exchange for the factory. I do not see this as an improvement overall (and the Dahl estate apparently had serious qualms as well), but it has the merit of preserving Charlie’s virtuous character. Off the top of my head, one could also introduce Wonka’s need for a successor earlier in the movie, with various bad options on the table until Charlie is anointed instead, perhaps because of some display of aptitude that he makes during the tour.

Other quibbles could be made about the movie; most of the songs were forgettable or actively inept (Candy Man and Veruca’s showstopper being exceptions). I do think that removing Mr. Bucket was a reasonable change, given that Charlie was forced into more responsibility as a breadwinner (literally). And the movie did cast Gene Wilder; and therefore, much is forgiven!

Story Conflict, Reader Interest, and “Charlie and the Chocolate Factory”

24 Friday Nov 2023

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Some months ago I read Roald Dahl’s Charlie and the Chocolate Factory to my children. I had not read the book since primary school, and it was interesting reading in a number of senses. One of them is that it seems to violate modern advice on how to write a novel—and yet it is a beloved piece of children’s literature regardless. So is the advice wrong? Or incomplete? Or are modern audiences just different than they were decades ago?

Conventional wisdom for authors is that a strong plot is based on a strong conflict or interweaved conflicts—and that each scene needs to advance the conflict in some way. (Or perhaps every other scene, if you follow the Deborah Chester model of action-reflection-action-reflection.) Without conflict, it seems, audiences get bored and simply stop reading.

Charlie and the Chocolate Factory seems to follow this model initially. We are introduced to the desperate poverty of the Bucket family, which is juxtaposed against the delectable decadence of a wondrous chocolate factory in the same town. The stakes are raised by the contest of the Golden Tickets, and one by one the tickets are claimed by other children who are truly horrid in their own ways. Charlie, meanwhile, shows his virtue by accepting his suffering without complaint, and doing what little he can to help the rest of the family.

But once Charlie finds the last ticket, the conflict as such seems to vanish. Charlie and Grandpa Joe go from one wonderful experience to the next, passive observers rather than active agents in the story. The other children suffer various unexpected fates, of course, but what exactly is the underlying conflict?

Moreover, the narrative gleefully brings itself to a halt several times, and invites the reader to enjoy such diversions as Square Candies that Look Round, which play zero role in the plot. Especially in such a short book, why does Dahl allow himself such self-indulgence?

Perhaps the more useful way to address the first issue is to reframe it. The story is not presenting a conflict—it is presenting the reader with two mysteries. The first mystery, created by the contrast between Charlie’s selflessness and the other children’s incredible vices, is whether Charlie will receive his just reward, and whether the other children will receive their just punishments. And the story goes on to answer that question in the affirmative, presenting a straightforward morality play as the other children receive punishments that fit the crime, so to speak. Charlie, being a good boy, does not overstep his bounds during the tour and seems to be in no danger.

Or is he? During my reread, I was struck by the depiction of Wonka himself. He seems indifferent to the danger that the other children are placed in, and even seems to relish the thought of Veruca Salt heading off to the incinerator, for example. As their parents understandably go into panic, Wonka blithely promises that “they all come out in the wash.” The net effect is quite sinister—and Dahl is a master of sinister, as you can see in his stories for adults such as “The Landlady.” (One might even be tempted to read Wonka as a devil-figure, with his goatee and his profession of tempting children with sweets. Dahl certainly had the literary chops to be thinking in that direction.)

So the other mystery is what are Wonka’s intentions, especially with Charlie? And this mystery is deepened as the story progresses, until we finally learn that Wonka was looking for a successor. In that one moment of eucatastrophe, both of the key mysteries of the story get resolved in a whoosh of joy.

But what of the Square Candies that Look Round, and other such flourishes? My read is that Dahl was trying to maintain a sense of wonder, even if it didn’t advance the plot per se. Rather than presenting conflict specifically, Dahl’s technique is to provoke interest in general. Conflict is only one tool to provoke interest; mystery and wonder are others.

Slavish focus on plot action was not always mandatory for authors. In earlier eras, authors often would digress into various topics just because they were interesting. (One could think of Victor Hugo’s multiple-chapter celebrations of, for example, the sewer system of Paris.) Today, that sort of thing seems to have fallen out of fashion—with some notable exceptions. Neal Stephenson sometimes gets grief for his unexpected monologues on the proper way to eat Captain Crunch cereal and the like.

I don’t believe that modern audiences are so very different than in former years. Yes, attention spans are shorter, and some readers are conditioned to expect more action. But if, regardless of these challenges, you think you can provoke reader interest with a sparkling piece of writing even if it doesn’t advance story conflict, I would say go for it.

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